Once upon a time there was an ugly man .He was going to a beauty salon he went through the dark forest . First there was a spider lady she said “I want to marry you “the man said "i'm going to the beauty salon to get hansome" So the man kept walking.then he met a lady she said "I want to marry you"the man said
"i'm going to the beauty salon to get hansome"So the man kept walking.Then he met a fat lady she said"I want to slourter you!"the man said "blah blah blah see ya sucker"so he RAN!!!Then he came to the beauty salon and when he was done he got in a ball and rolled down the hill first the spider lady said "wierd"so she pushed it down the hill a bit more then the 2nd lady and said "wierd"and pushed it onthen the fat lady hit the ball open and the man said" the most beutifull gets me"then they started fighting and the man sneeked away THE END BY HARRY
Hahaha very funny story Harry. Enjoyed reading it.
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