once on a quit street in london there was a 9 year old girl name grace. one day her mother asked her to take a baskit of mufins to her grandmas house and so she set off then she walked and walked untill she reched spinys and there a man came up to her and said i will give you 100 pond if you give me a mufin and then grace said mabye later and then she walked off then a stylelist came out from a fasion store and said your perfict for my latest disin then grace replid i will think about it then grace was only one more minite away from her grandmas house when a bear jumped out from the trees then a woods man choped his head off!!! and then before poor grace cloed even say thank you he said i will have my reward now and then grace replied when i come back and then she finaly reched granmas house the they gobled all the mufins up and then grace told granma evry thing that had happend then granma said here take these mufins and give it to those nasty men so grace ran up to each man that was waiting for her and gave each man a mufin and then there mouths made strange sounds like crrrisle crac pop! then grace arived safely home and never spock of it again................................................................................................................ by elianne
You have made this very interesting Elianne. Good work :) I enjoyed listening to you re-tell the story in class.
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